Update to “The Alignment”

I made a few small changes to “The Alignment”. I got a few comments on this one telling me that the detail wasn’t quite up to par on parts of it. I agreed and went ahead and made some revisions. I hope you guys like this version.

To view the story and the original click here. You can also click here for a print of the new version.

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11 responses

  1. Amber

    I really like the changes that you made. They are very subtle but they are good.

    June 10, 2010 at 3:17 am

  2. Hi Justin,
    I like it, I liked it before too. I want to go back and fix things in mine also. But my poor dragon will probably be stuck with one set of wings forever. =)

    June 10, 2010 at 9:14 pm

    • Thanks Jayme. I didn’t change much, I just got some comments about the stars or lack of, so I fixed them up. Figured since I hadn’t posted in awhile that I’d at least share that.

      I’m sorry to hear about your poor dragon! He’s really cool, I think it would be fun to see you go back and make some different versions of the wings for him.

      June 10, 2010 at 9:39 pm

      • Youre welcome =)
        Thanks for sharing. I have been slacking off for a while now. But I do have a picture in the works.

        The dragon has only one pair of wings…he needs another for the other side. But if no one notices, it’s all good.

        Hey, have you thought of listing your blog at BC -Blog catalog?

        June 10, 2010 at 9:56 pm

      • I’ve never heard of BC, what is it?

        June 10, 2010 at 9:58 pm

      • jayme

        Just a blog directory like Technorati.

        June 16, 2010 at 1:29 am

      • oh, well then no. I haven’t thought about doing that.

        June 16, 2010 at 4:27 pm

  3. I had to put the two versions side by side to compare. I do like the improved version better.

    June 13, 2010 at 2:16 am

  4. Great work!! my favourite 😉

    July 13, 2010 at 9:16 pm

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